evoleno 发表于 2012-4-15 23:44   全显示 1楼
就如主角的期待一样，读者的我其实也很期待黎瑾的肉戏，虽然终于上了，但是处理的太短对不起那份期待啊，以她的性格先是闷声和主角扭打，然后不决绝，最后配合。。
LZ的构思和叙事都很不错，可以单独去起点写作了，真的。再次念叨黎瑾的肉戏，再长一点 再长一点
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