6190965 发表于 2022-9-21 19:21   全显示 1楼
感谢大佬的爆肝更新……这一章的肉戏单独拿出来没啥毛病，不过宫明月就这么糊里糊涂就沦陷好像有扯吧？我记得你之前的章节里说过大帝级别的女性除非有爱否则不会这么容易就沦陷于性欲的………虽然我木有所谓反正撸个爽就完事了，但这章宫明月的违和感还是好明显的，而且宫明月才出场2章你又没有充份的去塑造人设就光速白给了，反而缺乏了一种期待感（以上纯个人感觉）另外辣小乞丐的天命光环未免太明显了吧，给人一种埋了伏笔又没理到位……哈
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