太康 发表于 2023-3-18 05:35   全显示 1楼
神雕侠侣剧情人物中小龙女描写方面写的很赞，但是在女主高潮外表上的描写稍微欠缺一下，要是再多一点描写那个尹志平与女主角就好，如果再多一些辱骂方面描写结合起来就更好了，但总体来说还是一篇不错的金庸老爷子同人文，希望作者快点后续，挺期待后面发展，已点赞收藏


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